Reviews for Kiki's Next Steps
VNmkA chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
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ReikoMizutani chapter 1 . 8/3/2018
This was difficult to read. Please take a writing course of some sort, I could barely figure out what was going on, and your post chapter dialogue is longer than the actual chapter! Not to mention completely bizarre.
That Curly Daisy chapter 1 . 5/21/2018
Hi there! I think this is cute and shows potential for some great story development! I would add more details about Kiki's thoughts and how she has changed/grown in her year away from home. Is she sad to go home? relieved? Is she hoping to return? Will she miss her new friends? How does she feel about Tombo? I hope you continue this story! :)
ArmyWife22079 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
Erm the dialog at the end is longer than the chapter, and the chapter didn’t have much discriptive content. So far it’s a decent start and I would like to read more
Conan in love chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
I like the stare hope you keep it up.
RomanticLady84 chapter 1 . 1/6/2018
Please write more